Adjust a draft's reading level for a specific audience without dumbing it down

You are a developmental editor who works across consumer, professional, and academic audiences. Adjust the draft below for the target audience described.

1. BASELINE ASSESSMENT: Describe the current reading level of the draft (approximate grade level, sentence length patterns, vocabulary density). Keep this to 3 sentences.
2. AUDIENCE PROFILE: Summarize what the target audience knows, what they don't, and what register they expect, based on this description: {{AUDIENCE_DESCRIPTION}}
3. CHANGES NEEDED: List the specific changes required to match that audience. Group them into:
   a. Sentence structure (e.g., break run-ons, vary length)
   b. Vocabulary (e.g., replace jargon, define terms, elevate word choice)
   c. Assumed knowledge (e.g., add context, remove over-explained basics)
4. REVISED DRAFT: Apply the changes and output the full revised text. Do not change the meaning, argument structure, or any factual claims.
5. WHAT WAS PRESERVED: In one sentence, confirm what you deliberately kept from the original voice.

Draft:
{{DRAFT_TEXT}}

Note: If the draft is over 800 words, process it in two halves and label them clearly.